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*Post poems or segments of poems.*Post helpful revision or editing comments.
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21 comments:
Ink being replaced in the Tech Shack,
Jumping rope in P.E.,
Kicking the ball at recess,
Can you guess my ABC poem?
Caroline L.
Moon Rocket waiting for me to hug her,
Never stopping, not even for rain,
Over the jumps I fly,
Can you guess my ABC Poem?
Alyssa S.
Going to tiger bites afterwards,
Happiness filling halls,
Intelligent students raising their hands,
Can you guess my ABC poem?
Lily E.
Can You Guess My ABC Poem
Secretly chews gum,
Tat-a-tail is what I call my little brother,
Usually sleepy,
Emi H.
Nadine A
At the Christmas tree shop, the smell of pine,
Buying sparkly colorful ornaments,
Caroling around the neighborhood,
can you guess my ABC poem?
Licking yummy Popsicle in the summer,
Canoes gliding across the water,
Fires warm you, but don’t get burned,
Ross T.
Can you guess my ABC poem?
Baking beignets in the oven,
Crinkled wrappers on the streets,
Dangling beads stuck in trees,
Ana Luisa R.
Bouncing bullfrogs in the swamp,
C racking of fire works in the sky on the fourth of July,
Dally beignets on the ride to school,
Can you guess my ABC poem?
Christine B.
Math books opening during math
New students rushing to their classes
Opening minds during science
Can you guess my abc poem??
Jennifer B.
Can you guess my ABC poem?
Pushing myself to be the best,
Quite loud noises of the tapping shoes,
Racing goes my heart at the fast beat,
By: Gracie
Can you guess my ABC poem?
ow, a jawbreaker broke my tooth.
pop rocks popping in my mouth,
quiet, I am eating candy,
Chandler D
Perfect teams playing in the championship,
Questions answered by coaches after games,
Referees making good and bad calls,
Can you guess my ABC poem?
Tucker W.
Can you guess my ABC poem?
Avalanche!
Boulders flying towards my head
Climbing is harder than I expected
By: Nolan C
Licking yummy Popsicle in the summer,
Canoes gliding across the water,
Fires warm you, but don’t get burned
Can you guess my ABC poem?
Ross T.
Abu Garcia reels casting in the water,
Bass jumping out of the lake,
Catfish lurking below the surface,
Can you guess my A.B.C poem?
Alexandru N
Chandler,
Your comment made me able to taste the sweet joys of candy. I think that's your ABC topic. Be sure to capitalize your first letters!
i like it Alyssa S. it was a very creative theme.
is it horses?
Nadine A.
Emi,
You miss spelled tattle tale.
Nadine, is your topic christmas?
Christine, your letter C is a space away from the word.
Nolan,
Rock climbing? Awesome!!
Tucker, sports? did I get it right?
Caroline L.
My Dream Car
Tyler J.
I like this car.
It is slimy and slick.
I have a question;
If I sit down,
Will I stick?
I wish I had a car that could fly
It would talk to me when I’m sad
These are the first two lines on my dream car
Erin P.
I like all of like all of the poems!
William B
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